Translation of Shen Mu Yu Tong's- Kuan Shu (forgive)

Hi!! We have done a rough translation of Shen Mu Yu Tong's Kuan Shu.. it's not perfect though...so, feel free to leave suggestions in the comment posts, so that others can refer to it.. thanks!!

M:Sitting face to face
Not willing to glance even once
Forced a smile (on face)
It looks very abrupt/sudden
I have taken a wrong step
Plunged into the deep, bottomless ravine

W: I still remember/ will think of
Your absurd blunder
(like a )Needle that stabbed my heart
(made my) Blood flowed non stop
Betrayed our happiness
Use our love as a gamble

(M)Had let go of feelings
(W)When will it end
(M)When I met you I wanted to stop wandering
(W)Let love return back to its pure and simple state

T: (Our) drifting about will come to an end
(Though)Made such unforgettable promises/commitment

M:Your tears make me helpless
W:Do you know how I endured shame for our love
W: Putting effort to learn how to forgive
(M:forgive that mistake)
W: Unwilling to let our love die halfway

M:I can still hear your heart still crying
W: Can’t forget as fast as the pain that is spreading
Hope that you realize
(M:I really realize)
T:The wound will slowly heal
And will let love cover it once again

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